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Critique by TSofian TSofian/critique/1158891744">Feb 24, 2015, 2:42:13 PM
I really like this. It has just enough color to add interest without being garish. The cockpit has a good view and I like the "smile" below it. If it is to be in atmo it might use some additional control surfaces or it might just get by with thrusters. The modular cargo containers look reasonable and the large size of the platform makes better economic sense than a lot of smaller freighters seen in SF. It could possibly use a few more panel lines and slight changes in color or tone on a few of the panels to show different materials or less weathering on new replacement ones.
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HandofManos Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excellent points. I really should put some more panel lines in there and weathering. Thanks for taking time to comment and taking time to write this.
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